Two scenes down! Well, kinda. Fixed the last scene, and then took two scenes, previously far apart and including casts of characters that only *mostly* overlapped. and melded them into one rather extended argument with at least four sides and three bones of contention.
Ow... some days, re-writing is as bad as writing raw text. Heck, it's worse; with raw text, you expect it to stink first time through.
Also looked into the next few scenes, and the next two are raw text. looking forward to it. But it's late.
(Ever found there just aren't enough words in your mood icons? The one I'd have chosen right now is "Uplifted". And that's the second time the exact word has had to make way for "well, it's really close...")
Ow... some days, re-writing is as bad as writing raw text. Heck, it's worse; with raw text, you expect it to stink first time through.
Also looked into the next few scenes, and the next two are raw text. looking forward to it. But it's late.
(Ever found there just aren't enough words in your mood icons? The one I'd have chosen right now is "Uplifted". And that's the second time the exact word has had to make way for "well, it's really close...")