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Feb. 23rd, 2010 11:44 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
lenora_roseI have decided I might want some help with critique for Bird of Dusk after all; not for the length issue, though no complaints if I have it, but because I realised that dismissing it all as length issue forgets at least one major reason I DO want other eyes on it.
For why, see this (revised) entry.
Please note, the issues raised in that entry do NOT exclude anyone else from offering. Because of course I have my moments of doubt in plotting (OMFG, who's going to believe this? It's a great big coincidence), character, language, and of course, the ridiculousness of the whole premise. Plus length.
Some things:
I had rather not have to print and mail the whole thing if it's possible to send the file instead. (I'm more willing to print and mail the first chapters if need be)
I had really rather a reasonably quick turnaround - as in, four to six months as an upper limit for the whole. I can start by sending the first 3, 6 or 11 chapters whenever I'm asked. (There are 35 chapters; 3 6 and 11 are the first three "parts" of 9.)
It's GBLTT friendly, and does include sex. If either of these bug you - I'm not the WRITER for you, never mind 'this is not the book'.
Trigger warning: Contains rape, psychological torture, actual torture, and emotional abuse by a parent.
For why, see this (revised) entry.
Please note, the issues raised in that entry do NOT exclude anyone else from offering. Because of course I have my moments of doubt in plotting (OMFG, who's going to believe this? It's a great big coincidence), character, language, and of course, the ridiculousness of the whole premise. Plus length.
Some things:
I had rather not have to print and mail the whole thing if it's possible to send the file instead. (I'm more willing to print and mail the first chapters if need be)
I had really rather a reasonably quick turnaround - as in, four to six months as an upper limit for the whole. I can start by sending the first 3, 6 or 11 chapters whenever I'm asked. (There are 35 chapters; 3 6 and 11 are the first three "parts" of 9.)
It's GBLTT friendly, and does include sex. If either of these bug you - I'm not the WRITER for you, never mind 'this is not the book'.
Trigger warning: Contains rape, psychological torture, actual torture, and emotional abuse by a parent.
