Date: 2006-02-11 10:18 pm (UTC)
(Sorry about the long delay in replying, it's been that kind of week...)

I prefer the first opening; I'm a fiend for opening sentences and something about the 1.1 version grabs me harder. But I like the way your narrator speaks of the God (esp. the metaphor of his name) and the Forest in version 1.2.
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